You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company that shipped the equipment.
In your letter
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
Say what the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you regarding defective working and unsuitable performance of the Lead-free soldering kit of model no. A5-4503 recently purchased from your company. I have used a similar tool in the past from the same range and hence, I know its capabilities. However, this product does not work properly and it overheats after every 3-4 minutes of use which should not happen. Additionally, it also needs a cooling time of more than 10 minutes between every use making it extremely time-consuming and impractical to use.
Let me explain in detail. Being a self- employed jewelry designer I run my own workshop of making rustic iron jewelry from home. For this purpose, I constantly require to utilize a lead-free soldering. Although there are several other alternatives available in the market, I choose this brand and product due to past successful experience and reputation. Now, unfortunately, its ineffectiveness is highly affecting my work and I am unable to fulfill the order on time.
Would you kindly exchange the current product either with a better soldering kit or else provide me with a replacement for the same which is in a better working condition? Please ensure that the new set of tools performs better than the current product specification and is suitable for the requirements mentioned above.
Thanks a lot for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Samantha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'utilizing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: utilizing
... For this purpose, I constantly require to utilize a lead-free soldering. Although there a...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am unable to fulfill the order on time. Would you kindly exchange the current pr...
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Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for the requirements mentioned above. Thanks a lot for your consideration. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19827586207 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02141337181 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646551724138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8102522026 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221375141005 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701274621804 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511053956195 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124044906309 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375334767986 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.