You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about some technical issues I am facing with a Dell laptop model no XDRT5566 recently purchased from your electronic store. Allow me to explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate, there are many problems which I am facing with the laptop. Firstly the battery backup doesn't last too long even after a full charging of 4 hours. additionally, there is a blue screen error while starting the laptop most of the times. Although blue screen error is resolved after restarting the laptop however the battery backup issue is a persistent issue. As you are aware that I had purchased this laptop for doing office work from home hence due to these technical issues my work is getting affected as I am unable to send reports to my office. For your information last week I have already received a warning from my reporting manager for not being able to complete the project work on time.
Lastly, I would need a new replacement for the laptop as it was purchased only a few days ago. additionally, I would also need a discount voucher of Rs 1000 as a competition for the loss of work I had to face with this laptop.
I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully
Saad
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... the laptop. Firstly the battery backup doesnt last too long even after a full chargin...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
... even after a full charging of 4 hours. additionally, there is a blue screen error while sta...
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Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...s it was purchased only a few days ago. additionally, I would also need a discount voucher o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, lastly, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63720930233 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57619001681 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2059646744 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0833333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172814077854 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638138456482 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529329057976 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915919874763 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305817012037 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.