You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• Say how your work could be done while you are away
• Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle in reference to a request for an interim transfer for 6 months to company corporate office based in Singapore. Let me explain the situation.
To elucidate as you are aware I am pursuing a master degree in International business from South Asia university hence as part of the curriculum it involves travel to Singapore for completion of some research project work at their University campus. Despite being busy with my research work I would also like to explore the possibility of working from company headquarters based in Singapore so that it does not impact the ongoing projects thus I would suggest while I work for the research project for the university on weekdays ,I could do the official work for the company on weekends additionally it will also be an alluring experience for me to explore the work culture at our head office.
I hope the above proposition would be acceptable additionally I would also request your approval for the same so that I can put a request forward to the human resource department for this movement.
Yours Sincerely
Ben
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 530, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h project for the university on weekdays ,I could do the official work for the com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90374331551 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85151621566 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.892320851 44.8134815571 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.833333333 76.5299724578 200% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 16.8248392259 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317522717286 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129847744294 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726363621979 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185344585259 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593966436174 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 8.37731958763 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 70.7449484536 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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