Dear Mike,
I am writing this letter to seek your permission and arrangement for my request, I put up two weeks ago, of temporary shifting to our China headquarters.
As I explained before, I would like to take this opportunity to embrace our company culture further and blend into the Chinese culture since most of our clients are from China. I believe such an experience could provide me with a more comprehensive understanding of Chinese consumption habits.
Jacky, my assistant marketing manager, would be the best person to cover me in this period because of his excellent organisation skills and leadership which reflect on his works.
I would like to seek your approval of the request and subsequent arrangements.
Yours sincerely,
Oscar
Votes
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 642.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 122.0 206.0 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26229508197 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02648880831 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729508196721 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5094195183 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130842208323 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661778749719 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354344558416 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746659090852 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356428144056 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.