Nowadays, social communities like to organise team activities for promoting individuals’ abilities. Many people believe that they could be benefited more important skills by interacting with others than being isolated. This essay will argue that how group activities and solo activities provide equal profits to people.
Employed people usually feel less stress and easier when working in teams. Teamwork provides people with an avenue for brainstorming, different views and knowledge exchanged as a result. They may therefore get more ideas for solving problems, finishing off difficult tasks and increasing creativity. There are many professionals expanded the work scopes as diversified skills developed through peer sharing and many people believe that the more extinguished techniques a professional acquired, the better his/her performance at work. Additionally, group activity encourages communication between team members which could release the stress. For this reason, people tend to be more joyful, and over time people learn to manage emotion better. Interactions could also help people to build up an extrovert personality and positive life attitude.
Nevertheless, it does not mean communication and cooperation skills are more important than other skills that people self-developed such as thinking independently and controlling attention. Adults can enhance independence through play alone while relying on each other in a group activity. People have to solely explore solutions and try different approaches to complete a task. The quiet environment makes people efficiently focusing on specific matters without interruptions and led to fast information digesting skill. Also, people get more time for self-improvement by escaping unnecessary social activities.
To conclude, I believe people should balance their time for joining group actives and enjoying solo activities, both are beneficial.
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I’ve taken my exam today i.e
I’ve taken my exam today i.e on 10th of August 2019,I’ve got the same essay group activities then isolated one
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, as for, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00363636364 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13023960744 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0590498476 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167036606301 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564741442716 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527060802072 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120087710097 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713909671835 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.22 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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