Travel and tourism is one of the world’s largest industries and one of the most important items of economic of some countries. However, many people worry about the negative impacts of international tourism on the environment. This essay tends to argue about individuals’ concerns and possible mitigations.
It is true that touristry is the constituent of cause for global climate change crisis. Tourism contributes to worldwide greenhouse gas emissions, with transportation accounting for major of this like people take flight approach outbound tour. And, tourism often puts pressure on natural resources through over-consumption, often in places where resources are already scarce. Typically, tourism leads to overruns of water. An ordinary suburb golf course in a tropical country, for example, uses as much water as thousands of rural villagers. It also uses plenty of chemical fertilisers, pesticides and herbicides per year. Also, many scenic spots jeopardised by tourists’ bad behaviour like surpluses waste. Some people even take improper touristy activities which might harm the scene due to incompetent tour guidance. Additionally, tourism puts enormous stress on local land use and can lead to soil erosion, increased pollution, natural habitat loss, and more pressure on endangered species. These effects can gradually destroy the environmental resources on which tourism itself depends.
Nevertheless, like other things in life, there are always solutions that come up with the problem. There are many examples of what individuals and organisations are doing to improve the environment for tourism and local communities. Some tourist resorts close the business during the nonpeak season for clearing rubbishes. More and more countries have been promoting green technology for building hotels and resorts to reduce energy consumption.
To conclude, the government could step out to arouse people's awareness of environment protection and to introduce policies for controlling tourist' behaviour and encouraging eco-friendly touristy activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: OF_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: of course
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88079470199 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1224305256 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668874172185 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7174732179 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166432905768 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456560374949 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04496155509 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820776440127 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488578066074 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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