Dear Paul,
Trust that you are well. It’s been a long time since you left Singapore. I believe you had already used to Canada’s live. There are some changes in my life in these few months which I’d like to share with you.
I finally resigned and found a new job. My new employer is a real estate company, their development business span over a few building types such as residential, commercial and even the industrial. My main work scope is preparing the feasibility study which helping our company analysis the potentialities of the target lands. I am also required to work with our in-house architects to work out the conceptual plan with functionalities orientation.
Besides, I also moved into a condominium which just nearby the train station, it is very convenient. There are many facilities provided in this condo such as GYM, tennis court and swimming pool. I suppose you would be surprised when you write this. I now take 2-3 times exercises a week. You will see a very sporty man when we meet next time.
So, how about your recent lives? Have you got babies? I hope we could soon to meet again either in Singapore or Canada.
Best Regards,
Oscar
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e and trained to be an ESL teacher. Now Im working full-time in a private language...
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...ad of way out in the suburbs. Suddenly, theres so many fun things to do, in the evenin...
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...t changes. So, how about you? I hope youll have a chance to visit Canada again soo...
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... meantime, please write and let me know whats new with you. Warm wishes Kim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, well, while, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17672413793 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05501312013 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681034482759 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5832409381 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.0 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2105263158 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195623042769 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494299671065 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510153632614 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117345592099 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043457184782 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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