You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to ask for your permission to work at the head office in Los Angeles for a period of six months.
The reason why I made this request is because I want to improve my team-leading skills. By working in the headquarter, I could see how experienced seniors bring their teams together and enhance everyone’s cooperation and productivity. this will definitely help me lead my team better in projects, especially the big and important ones.
I have asked mr. johnson if he could temporarily take my position during my leave and he accepted. I am sure he will be able to take care of everything while I am away. Also, I will participate in every online meeting of my team and support mr. johnson via emails. if any urgent problems occurred, I would fly back immediately to directly instruct my team.
I hope you would take my request into consideration and it would be absolutely my pleasure if you could send a reference letter to the managers at the headquarter.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
.... The reason why I made this request is because I want to improve my team-leading skill...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e my team-leading skills. By working in the headquarter, I could see how experienced seniors br...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ne's cooperation and productivity. this will definitely help me lead my team be...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...eam and support mr. johnson via emails. if any urgent problems occurred, I would f...
^^
Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d a reference letter to the managers at the headquarter. I look forward to receiving your re...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86021505376 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98231578188 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0899557785 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5384615385 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200180810392 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063324231742 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924586049868 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128765233834 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121689029774 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.