You work as part time and you are attending a course. Your manager offered you full time and asked to leave the course. Write a letter about your decision on job offer.
In the letter, you should describe:
how you feel about the job offer
what is your decision
explain why you made the decision
Dear Mr. Khan,
I am writing this letter with regard to your full-time employment offer and to give my decision about it.
I am extremely delighted that you considered me for this position. It would be a great opportunity for the enhancement of my skills, such as time management, communication, ability to manage work pressure. As it will provide me ample time to work and earn money, my financial situation will improve as a result.
However, I cannot accept the full-time job at this stage of my life, rather would like to continue the same old part-time job. It is fulfilling my all requirements; thus, it might not be feasible to leave the course.
Owing to my academic goals, I took this decision. I am taking classes of this course since last January and it is expected to complete in next three months; therefore, I cannot leave it in the middle because I might not be able to receive a certificate, which is my prime objective. Furthermore, this subject will be worthwhile later in my work life; I may not accept this great opportunity due to all these reasons.
I would like to express my gratitude once again for the offer and hope that you will understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Salman Khan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79342723005 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80648308129 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596244131455 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3275013681 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 4.34317383033 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210231705169 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810155196767 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657489880497 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131137802698 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798761374429 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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