You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop
1- ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them.
2- Ask what the prices are
3- how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inquire about some electric goods which I need to buy for my newly constructed apartment. Let me provide the details.
To elucidate since I just moved in my apartment I need to order around 20 sets of Phillips tube light 20 amperes each, 5 units of 10-ampere bulbs, six extension cords, 6 units of halogen bulbs. may I know if you have these items in stock if not would it be possible for you to order them? Additionally, may I also know the prices of each product type as I would like to do a thorough comparison against prices provided by the online stores? Although I have heard that your store provides the best prices in the town even then I would like to do a comparison of prices to satisfy my curiosity.
Lastly, since I am travelling to Vietnam today on an urgent business trip may I know how long would it be possible for you to hold the aforesaid items so that I can decide when to order the electric goods?
I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely
said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inquire about some elect...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... apartment. Let me provide the details. To elucidate since I just moved in my ap...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: May
...ension cords, 6 units of halogen bulbs. may I know if you have these items in stock...
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Line 4, column 442, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t prices provided by the online stores? Although I have heard that your store provides t...
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Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecide when to order the electric goods? I look forward to your response. Yours ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to your response. Yours sincerely said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38829787234 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49010604438 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622340425532 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9141701947 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201069635674 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723642841544 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744475309575 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10175307899 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676280788753 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.