You would like to participate in a training course write a letter to your manager about the course and ask for permission In your letter Give details of the coursewhy is it useful for you How will it benefit your work

Dear Mr. David,

I am writing this letter to seek your permission to participate in the "Project Management Professional Exam Prep" training course. It is a 5-day long course and is a mandatory requirement to appear for PMP exam along with other eligibility criteria. This course is offered by different organizations across the country but, I liked "Mindmapper" as this institute has a better reputation among the professionals.

This course will help me to learn about the best methodology available for managing any project. It will assist me to deliver project deliverables within the constraints of budget, schedule, and resources. The course curriculum is also helpful for people to acquire leadership capability.

As I am working as a project manager of your company and managing complex IT projects, this course will enable me to manage IT projects that come with some deadlines provided by our customers which also have a resource limitation and a budget allocated to complete it. By attending this training, I will be able to close the project with the given constraints efficiently.

I will be waiting to have your permission to attend this training course.

Yours faithfully,

Abed Joy

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40414507772 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31028479882 2.54303337028 130% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616580310881 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4864785374 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255181060018 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1055380727 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638020560613 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153854084894 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276996787895 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.