You would like to participate in a training course. Write a letter to your manager about the course and ask for permission. In your letter: Give details of the course; why is it useful for you? And how will it benefit your work?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to put forward a request to you for an extension of my stay here in the usa. you will be pleased to know that I have completed in-house training with 95% success.
I am grateful to company management for sending me to the usa. I have learned many innovative strategies from inventory management to the retail dispatch of products. However, I could not complete the 15-day on-field training owing to extreme weather conditions. this course imparts practical skills i.e. how to apply strategies in real-world problems. Complimentary to this, the course will also provide free online sessions on how to achieve sustainable development.this is the reason I need your permission to overstay here and complete the training for two reasons. First, It is necessary to observe how strategies are applied. Second, our company will be also benefitted by from their training sessions. also, the company will not issue a certificate of in-house training until I complete it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Surbhi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9195854825 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1365726223 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286793319381 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887003692766 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568807755856 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153471134789 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597186005165 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.