You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
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dear Sir/ Ma'am,
I am Ahmed Karam; I am working as a production manager at steel Factory in Saudi Arabia. I am writing to you regarding the next seminar on CNC machines.
As I mentioned - above, I work at a steel factory which needs sophisticated machines; these machines use for cutting, welding and painting. Therefore, I am looking to attend this seminar to seek a new generation of these machines.
Hence, I do need information about it, and I will appreciate it if you can give me some details. I want to know about the seminar's date; moreover, I would request you to send the program's plan.
Another thing I forget to mention is that will you arrange the accommodation for me? Or I should arrange it. In case I will do it; could you tell me the cost of it?
I look forward to hearing from you; your prompt response is highly appreciated. Should you require any further information, you will contact me; here it is my contact number: 55778899. Thanks in advance.
Faithfully yours,
Ahmed Karem
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Dear
dear Sir/ Maam, I am Ahmed Karam; I am wor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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dear Sir/ Maam, I am Ahmed Karam; I am working as a prod...
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Message: "needs sophisticated" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'sophisticating' or 'to be sophisticated'.
Suggestion: sophisticating; to be sophisticated
..., I work at a steel factory which needs sophisticated machines; these machines use for cuttin...
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...eek a new generation of these machines. Hence, I do need information about it, a...
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... request you to send the programs plan. Another thing I forget to mention is tha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...Thanks in advance. Faithfully yours, Ahmed Karem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70786516854 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75472815347 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674157303371 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5618389276 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4615384615 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220086736271 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723460327983 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729599136981 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113516491147 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428810666093 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.