The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber-crime and ensure safety of users.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
the internet is the World Wide Web which is the mean source of communication around the world. However, I am of the belief that governments should impose laws in order to decrease internet crimes such as hacking and deceiving especially at cybers. In this essay, my point of view will be demonstrated before reaching a conclusion.
To begin with, the World Wide Web plays an important role when it comes to modern crimes. In other words, It has become easier now for anyone to trick people by using an internet application. Not only do they use the internet to trick people but also they use it to cheat them. A prime example of this when employers receive an email, which contains a virus from an unknown destination, can harmful their work. Hence, Governments should spend more investment to make good tracking for persons who send such these mails
In addition to that, haking has become an effective element for most thieves. As an illustration, If there is no significant control on websites, It will lead to an increase in internet crims. Hackers every day try to steal computers users by trying to access their devices and take some important information and asking them for money. Moreover, they use the internet to hacking some banks. for instance, research has been published by The Economist showed that each year there are three banks are stolen by internet hackers. Thus, I would like to reiterate my suggestion to impose laws to prevent users from hacking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86904761905 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5924667257 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3588534982 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139860172106 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04635309838 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260387425306 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095427798142 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189311307988 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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