The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber-crime and ensure safety of users.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The increased use of internet has given rise to many serious issues such as cyber bullying, hacking, cyber fraud etc. In my opinion, such type of cyber crime has been burgeoned over a last decade and government should take preventive steps in putting a restraint over the undue usage of internet.
To begin with, due to easy accessibility to internet, people are finding new ways to commit a crime. There are numerous fraudulent websites that are meant to hack the personal information of people like bank account details or residential address. Many people get trapped by these deceitful websites and consequently lose their money. Even many internet users get suspicious emails from unknown ids. For instance, several times I get emails of winning a million dollars lottery and thus asking for my bank information. To save people from such crime, government should ban such dubious websites. Various techniques such as firewalls should be used and there should be a continuous monitoring of such malicious online activities by cyber cell.
In addition, the uncontrolled usage of internet is making a negative impact on youngsters. Many teenagers get addicted to pornographic websites and spoil their future. Several adolescents have become the victims of cyber bullying which resulted in many cases of suicides. For example, an online game named Blue Whale, incited many school children to perform atrocious tasks and eventually they tried to kill themselves. Since the youngsters are the future of our country, their safety is paramount. Government should enforce stringent laws and strict punishment for cyber bullying. Furthermore, the restrictions on internet should be reinforced, so that people can't misuse the internet.
In conclusion, in this era of media and technology, criminals use internet as an easy source to perpetrate a crime. Therefore, it is the responsibility of government to reduce this crime and save the public by controlling internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 662, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...et should be reinforced, so that people cant misuse the internet. In conclusion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35806451613 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8789468678 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8705540625 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22204144824 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708665446175 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680748387635 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152379945322 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519726163089 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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