You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter inorder to enquire about the seminar you are organizing on digital marketing strategies for growth in Paris.
I am currently employed with ICICI Securities as a Digital Marketing Manager and manage all aspects of marketing for my firm. This seminar looks very relevant to my work and so my company wants me to attend it. It would be a great help if you can share more details about the seminar program and other related information.
Firstly, I wanted to know the duration of the seminar so I can book my flight tickets accordingly. It would great if I can get the program agenda and details of the speakers participating in this seminar. This will help me prepare for the the topics which are going to be discussed so I can participate actively in the discussions and get maximum learnings from this exercise. Lastly, please help me with a detailed break up of the cost for this seminar.
I look forward to your response so I can start preparing accordingly for my trip.
Yours sincerely,
John Wick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... seminar. This will help me prepare for the the topics which are going to be discussed ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... seminar. This will help me prepare for the the topics which are going to be discussed ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79781420765 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71271713308 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2074600046 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219777272356 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928330043553 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080788114583 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138045801638 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727788655169 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.