You would like to work overseas, write a letter to an employment agency. Write:-
- what job you would like to apply
- what companies are you looking for
- why do you want to work overseas
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with reference to you advertisement in the local ‘Environment News’ magazine for the want of various categories of workers job opportunities in New Zealand. I consider myself that my credentials match with the category of certified nursing assistant and I want to apply for the same job position. I am enclosing my Resume for this job along with this email.
Currently, I am appointed as a nurse at a Regional Hospital in Gujrat, India. I have been working here for the past three years. During these years, I have furnished my self with all the nursing functions, which include taking and recording temperature, pulse, blood pressure and respiratory rates along with preparing treatment trays for the patients. Strong communication skills and reacting effectively and actively in the emergency situations have made me a responsible nursing assistant.
Although I enjoy working at my present job but, I am also looking for new opportunities in the developed world. I am confident that working in New Zealand with brighten my nursing assistant carrer in future. Through, this experience I would be able to serve people in a well manner in future.
Hereby, I am providing you mym details to contact me for any kind of further required information. My mobile number: 220-475-4659 and my email id: raman.sing09@yahoo.com. I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Raman Singh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 198, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...th brighten my nursing assistant carrer in future. Through, this experience I would be ab...
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Line 6, column 283, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e able to serve people in a well manner in future. Hereby, I am providing you mym det...
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Line 8, column 193, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
....sing09@yahoo.com. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Ram...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, kind of, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20572359142 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4694728209 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7857142857 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168674913823 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597336826172 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567579964626 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104110212715 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456438825345 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.