Your child is going on a 3 day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter and …
Say why would you like to go on the trip.
Suggest what you could do to help during the trip.
Ask other questions about the trip.
Dear Mrs. Dina,
I am Safaa Hussein, and I am a mother of Omar Ahmed, one of your students in class 4b. I am writing to inform you that I would like to join the school trip next month.
The first point I want to raise is that unfortunately, my son is going to need me during this trip; he is on medication and he usually forget to take his medicine on time, and he really wants to be with his friends during this journey as most of them are travelling.
Another thing I forgot to mention is that I have been to Turkey before and I might be helpful to the team. Moreover, I have no problem in taking some responsibilities with the students such as waking them up and helping the young ones in getting ready on time.
One final issue is that I need to know if the school will need any documents from me and also the amount of money that I need to pay for joining the summer trip.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Should there be any queries, please do not hesitate to contact me; here is my WhatsApp number: 25567932165.
Thanks in advance.
Sincerely yours,
Safaa Hussein
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forgets'.
Suggestion: forgets
...rip; he is on medication and he usually forget to take his medicine on time, and he re...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, another thing, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29268292683 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39771852694 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8239130647 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 4.34317383033 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194639541295 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057959113817 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079070765798 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880413515697 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504025449852 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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