Your colleague from a different town is coming next month and you are moving out of your current accommodation. Write a letter to the colleague to recommend they move into your house and say– Why are you moving to another house? – Describe your presen

Dear Mark,

I hope this letter find you and your family well. I am writing this letter to state an appropriate recommendation regarding your accommodation in this city.

I am really fond of my current apartment, although I am urged to relocate my place with respect to my wife pregnancy. Fortunately, we are going to have our second child next month. So it would be viably wise to rent a bigger flat.

My flat is placed in last floor of building, and takes advantage of a spectacular view of a cozy park. In case of interior facilities, it possesses one bedroom, bathroom and a lovely living room. As a matter of fact, the elevator has repaired regularly until mow and it is in a good mood. If your wife has got a car, it is good news for her that we not only have a parking in the basement, but we also have another one in the yard.

I think it is indeed fitted you and your family. Firstly, it is really cloth to the office and this factor ease the commuting to the workplace for you especially in the morning. In addition, a high ranking school is near our building in the next street, therefore, you can register your little daughter there. The final point is that the rental is extremely low. I am definitely that sure you have the sweet time of your life in this place.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Thomas

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng your accommodation in this city. I am really fond of my current apartment,...
^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Thomas
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, as a matter of fact, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47011952191 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55703654605 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2233016379 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.125 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 4.34317383033 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229624318449 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778752784408 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728431509085 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115821667075 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076535679938 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Dear john,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter with reference to your letter, which I received last Sunday.l am glad to know that you are coming to my town next month. I recommend to you to stay with me.

You glad to know that I bought a new house in Liverpool. My current resident is far away from the office and is not very spacious. But the new accommodation is bigger and located in the city centre near to our office.

I recommend you to stay with me in my new apartment. It has all the facilities at walking distance and surrounded with stores,malls, restaurants and gym.

I am excited to hear from you. I hope you consider my suggestion and give us opportunity to spend time together.