There is a controversial debate surrounding the issue of distinguishing ethical things by children throughout the globe in this era. Some people assert that punishment is an indispensable item regarding improvement in this problem. To me, this idea to some extent seems appealing in the light of the fact that it would not only have vital impacts on their characteristics, but have immense influences in the society in the future.
Firstly, it is often said that the personalities of the adults form in the early age when they are child. As long as the families could make use of this period effectively, so they would make bright future for their child. However, it could have detrimental effects on them if they employ wrong sorts of penalties. In specific, corporal punishments regarding making them aware of the difference between wrongdoings and moral values are harmful for formation of children personalities. For example, according to the recent survey conducted by India University, sixty percent of culprits of crimes throughout the world have encountered physical punishment in their homes of schools. Therefore, it would be wise if government confined parent and heads of the schools to constitute other types of penalties. In school teachers can take lesson their students by assigning them excessive amount of home works.
Secondly, the next generation would construct the societies in the future, Hence, the violent and harsh kinds of punishment that would contribute to nurturing future delinquents should be stopped. More the children experience tough childhood alongside by cruel penalties either by parents or teachers, more they are likely to be fierce. For instance, statistics have demonstrated that those who have faced corporal punishment in their earlier age, 60 percent are more susceptible to have unsuccessful marriages. Thus, the communities would not beneficiary by the future.
To sum up, it would distinctively be wise if government take effective action with regard to prohibition of physical punishment for children no matter how slight they are. Not only would not it manifest the difference between wrong and right for them, but they would also have negative effect on their characteristics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'manifests'?
Suggestion: manifests
... slight they are. Not only would not it manifest the difference between wrong and right ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37891737892 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01593832198 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2454069413 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202862624537 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671544772923 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408668489039 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127963707817 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267103916871 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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