Your company opened a new branch in another country. Write a letter to your manager
– Say you wish to join the new branch.
– What job you want to have there
– ask for details about the new job.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter with regard to a job at a new branch of our company which has opened in France.
As you already knew that I used to study in France for two years, so I could speak French pretty well. I believe this is a great opportunity to challenge myself and hone my skills at a different position in another country.
I have known that we are still looking for a wholesale supervisor which requires a lot of knowledge about our core products and can speak bilingual. I think I am suitable for this job as I have been working in our company for over five years, and I am quite familiar with the culture of France.
Could you please give me some more requirements and information about this job? And please let me know if I have to prepare anything in order to work overseas.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely,
Phu Tran
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... core products and can speak bilingual. I think I am suitable for this job as I h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, well, i think, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51533742331 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50166868169 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2265191075 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7777777778 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270758058549 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937885467518 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654419182369 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131651681846 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810351965033 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.