Your family is going to move to another town.
Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son.
Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Samvedna Puri, professional Lawyer and I am going to be the dweller of your locality as shifting in one of the apartments very soon. I am inscribing this piece of epistle to inquiry about the admission of my younger son 'Ram' in 10th standard. As I have heard alot regarding profound academic faculity employed at your academy.
Even though, all school authorities are strictly recommended to conduct enrollment of puplis with the beginning of financial year but it would great if your institution could apprise me with the placement provisions in the middle of term. Moreover, these years of career are undoubtedly imperative to constitute a magnifisent foundation for further life, therefore kindly inform me regarding this query as soon as possible.
Although he posses very active behaviour in the classroom which can be evaluated from his previous academic results, the spirit of sportsmenship can be seen from his national level tournaments certificates. Beside being a football player, he has profound interest in other physical activities.
I anticipate a positive response at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Samvedna Puri.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of my younger son Ram in 10th standard. As I have heard alot regarding profound ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50543478261 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06166441477 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717391304348 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0181475331 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.555555556 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158062672177 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637396191023 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363095594682 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800831121923 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334534274068 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 70.7449484536 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 7.59969072165 137% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.