Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son.
Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.
Dear Sir/Madam,
In this letter, I would like to ask you whether my son, John, could study at your school. My family moved into Almaty city a week ago, on October 7, but we have not decided about what school our son will study at. From numerous reviews on the Internet, I have learned that school №35 is the best education center in Almaty city. Therefore, my wife, Margot, intends to apply his documents to it.
My son is a fourteen-year-old boy. He does well at both mathematics and physics. His former teacher in maths used to say that he could solve complicated equations both faster and correctly than anyone else in the class. His classmates also would ask him to help them with the formulas and laws of physics. However, he does not seems to be interested in languages and literature. We have tried to motivate him to study these subjects, but he apparently does not want to excel in them as well.
In terms of hobbies, his favorite sport is football. He always ready to participate in any championship as a defender, but he is also good at attacking. Nevertheless, he tend to play video games for many hours. You might think that we are too permissive parents, but in my opinion he develops social skills, while communicating with other children from different countries.
In conclusion, my spouse and I would be grateful, if you as the the Principal allow my child to study at your school. You could either send me a message to my email address “tolikfdfxxx@mail.ru” or phone on the following phone number 87001444413.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 328, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...d laws of physics. However, he does not seems to be interested in languages and liter...
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Line 9, column 328, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...d laws of physics. However, he does not seems to be interested in languages and liter...
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Line 13, column 171, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...lso good at attacking. Nevertheless, he tend to play video games for many hours. You...
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Line 19, column 61, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ouse and I would be grateful, if you as the the Principal allow my child to study at yo...
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Line 19, column 61, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ouse and I would be grateful, if you as the the Principal allow my child to study at yo...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16691611808 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0019075037 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135946114763 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456458053639 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537498589428 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756091431704 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636600121654 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.