Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son.
Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.
Dear Sir/Madam,
In this letter, I would like to ask you whether my son, John, could study at your school. My family moved into Almaty city a week ago, on October 7, but we have not decided about what school our son will study at. From numerous reviews on the Internet, I have learned that school №35 is the best education center in Almaty city. Therefore, my wife, Margot, intends to apply his documents to it.
My son is a fourteen-year-old boy. His performance in both mathematics and physics are outstanding. His former teacher in maths used to say that he could find a solution to complicated equations both faster and correctly than anyone else in the class. His classmates also would address to him to help them with the formulas and laws of physics. However, he does not seems to be interested in languages and literature. We have tried to motivate him to study these disciplines, but he apparently does not want to excel in them as well.
In terms of hobbies, his favorite sport is football. He always ready to participate in any championship as a defender, but he is also good at attacking. Nevertheless, he has a wasteful pastime. He plays video games for many hours. You might think that we are too permissive parents, but in my opinion he develops social skills, while taking part in the communication with other children from different countries.
In conclusion, my spouse and I would be grateful, if you as the Principal allow my child to continue his eduction at your school. You could either send me a message to my email address “tolikfdfxxx@mail.ru” or phone on the following phone number 87001444413.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 253, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...orrectly than anyone else in the class. His classmates also would address to him to...
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Line 9, column 367, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...d laws of physics. However, he does not seems to be interested in languages and liter...
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Line 9, column 367, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...d laws of physics. However, he does not seems to be interested in languages and liter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 285.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22184754935 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628070175439 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6272086356 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1111111111 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14267558813 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449690887142 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540121246978 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799040005155 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632928864209 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.