Your friend has been recently blessed with a baby. You have bought a gift.
-Explain about the gift you have bought
-What are the features of the gift
-Ask him to make an arrangement, so that you can present the gift.
Your friend has been recently blessed with a baby. you have bought a gift.
-Explain about the gift you have bought
-What are the features of the gift
-Ask him to make an arrangement, so that you can present the gift.
Hi Sam,
I hope you are doing well. It's been a long time that we have met and had a chat. From your facebook status, I noticed that you are blessed with a baby boy. The first thing after seeing the post, I went shopping in my local dmart store to purchase a gift.
I and my wife were confused between the host of gifts that dmart has to offer for young kids. I was of the view that I should by a remote control car and she said to go with clothes. Eventually, I had to agree with her and purchased clothes.
The clothe that I have bought has some distinct features. They are stretchable in nature and does not hamper the skin of the child. Moreover, The colour of the top is red and has a small jingle, which produces sound when the child is moving.
I and my family members will be glad to meet you next Saturday and present this gift to him. It will be great if you can arrange for accommodation and food. we will be staying there for one day and leave on Sunday as I have an important presentation in the office.
I am awaiting your response soon.
Best Wishes,
Beast
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... has been recently blessed with a baby. you have bought a gift. -Explain about th...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ee with her and purchased clothes. The clothe that I have bought has some distinct fe...
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Line 27, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...can arrange for accommodation and food. we will be staying there for one day and l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.344 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21260389587 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4362622864 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3333333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.598199834803 0.216113520407 277% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160710849165 0.0766984524023 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223786046866 0.0603063233224 371% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319536454002 0.12726935374 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.241160953096 0.0580467560999 415% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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