Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him.
Write a letter replying to your friend's offer. In your letter:
• explain what you know about your friend's company
• choose whether you accept or decline the offer
• give reasons for your choice
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Frank,
Hello, how are you? I hope you are having a joyous time. I received your letter yesterday and was glad to know that you have offered me a job in your travel company.
I am very excited to know that you have started your own travel company “Holiday Destinations” and have given a kick-start to your business career. Moreover, I am thrilled to know that your company is expanding successfully and earning good profits. Furthermore, you have also included the destination vacation to the Maldives which is not offered by any other travel company.
I regret to inform you that I will not be able to join your company as a travel agent as I have been recently appointed as a senior manager in IDFC Mutual Funds.
This job profile will help me not only to enhance my skills and knowledge but will also aid me in developing a successful professional career. Additionally, they are offering many opportunities for growth prospects in the future.
I am very happy for you and I am sure you will excel in your business very rapidly. Please plan to visit me with you family in Delhi. We will have a lot of fun.
Take care and All the best for your future.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69626168224 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77575206851 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565420560748 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4841004539 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7857142857 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327178388711 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114343523566 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875774404574 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174129874442 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999497125282 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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