Your friend is planning to come and visit you next month. Unfortunately you can’t meet him/her. Write a letter to your friend and say– Apologise about it.– Explain the reason why you can’t meet him/her.– Suggest a different arrangement to meet l

Essay topics:

Your friend is planning to come and visit you next month. Unfortunately you can’t meet him/her. Write a letter to your friend and say

– Apologise about it.
– Explain the reason why you can’t meet him/her.
– Suggest a different arrangement to meet later.

Dear Priyanka,
Hope you good in your health and spirit. I got your letter last week that you are planning to visit this weekend to meet me but I will be not able to meet you due to some unavoidable circumstances, please allow me to elaborate the reason in detail in this letter.

Last week, my maternal uncle met with an accident and he has to undergo for a knee surgery and he is hospitalized. As you know I am working and it's hard for me to take a leave from my job because of target pressures so I have decided to meet my uncle this weekend and that's the reason I will be not here at my home. Please accept my apologies. It would be great if you can postpone your plan for next weekend or maybe some other time when you prefer so we can meet and spend some memorable time together.

Please write back to me as soon as possible regarding your new schedule so I can prepare something for you and make myself available for you.

Your faithfully,
Divya

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and he has to undergo for a knee surgery and he is hospitalized. As you know I am...
^^
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...cided to meet my uncle this weekend and thats the reason I will be not here at my hom...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, as to, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28415300546 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38126001007 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5821206727 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285873838725 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120461976874 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890951050956 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207929362707 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529548177539 0.0580467560999 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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