Dear John,
How are you?
Last week you asked me to give you some practical advises for your IELTS exam. Sorry, I have just a few times to answer your request. As you know, nowadays, I am busy with our construction project. John, as you mentioned in your letter, last month I attended in this exam and my result was not bad, overall 7.5 point. So, what did I do to get this score?
First, I prepared a daily preparation schedule and put all my tasks inside of it. Then I hung it from above my work desk in my room, so that I was able to see it and it accelerated my responsibility and memory. You must study everyday and least 2 hours each day.
Secondly, try to repeat all the academic words and do plenty of speaking in your last week prior to the exam date. Never keep whole our reading, listening or writing tasks for this time. It is Ok to do some tasks from these sections too, however, try to give your focus on speaking and vocabulary.
Finally, on the day of exam, please, try to wake up 2 hours earlier. You have to be mentally awake, not just physically. And try to talk in English for yourself, even on the way to exam place.
It will keep your concentration active and your attention will less distract.
I am sure that you will do your best and your result will be fine. Because your English skills are quite strong. That is why, do not panic and try hard.
Wish you luck!
Yours,
Ruslan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...sponsibility and memory. You must study everyday and least 2 hours each day. Secondly...
^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...your best and your result will be fine. Because your English skills are quite strong. T...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3670411985 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30566859596 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7591724498 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.35 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 4.34317383033 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304690185713 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909084294576 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691059977974 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140810527551 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810298632829 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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