It is a fact that in some places having a real estate, such as a house which legally belongs to a person is crucial in comparison with being a tenant in others' house. This demonstrates a status for the ones who are keen on obtaining their own properties so that it might be very sensitive issue in such conditions. It has negative feedbacks as limiting a person with a place or any area and obliging someone to pay long-term mortgages.
First of all, in some countries having your own property is considered a social status inside a society. Some women pay attention whether a man who is aiming to marry them has his own home or he is renting it. This rule applies to in the Eastern countries, such as Azerbaijan, Turkey or Middle East countries. For example, according to the survey carried out by Ministry of Justice of Republic of Azerbaijan, most of the divorce cases are related with owning home.
Moreover, having a house in a particular place of a city limits a person's independence. These people usually try to find jobs near to their home and it narrows the probability of building a strong career. Based on the statistics illustrated by National Statistics Committee of Turkey, 80% of people who are owning homes work in same places for years in order to destinations. By assuming that some of them are excellent specialists and they might work better places, owning a home destroys array of carries. Additionally, in most of the countries real estate values are too much and young couples often need take mortgages with heavy bank interests. There are big annual rates on banks in some countries, especially, third level ones. It takes long years to reimburse the whole bank obligations till owning the house obtained with mortgage terms. For instance, in Georgia, 60% of people are obliged due to the bank high rates.
In conclusion, inspite of owning a home can be seen a high social status in some countries, it has negative impacts on the people as limiting them into one area of a city or any place and high mortgages prices create difficulties for the people who are obliged to pay for the whole life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...n a particular place of a city limits a persons independence. These people usually try ...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... Committee of Turkey, 80% of people who are owning homes work in same places for years in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72580645161 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.675972317 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529569892473 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7615370964 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209324351682 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064909109348 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485235032598 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137921237017 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222944574947 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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