Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.Write a letter to your friend.Say why a driving license is advantageousRecommend driving schoolGive any extra guidance/tips

Essay topics:

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.
Write a letter to your friend.
Say why a driving license is advantageous
Recommend driving school
Give any extra guidance/tips

Dear Abhishek,

Hope you are doing well.

Iam writing this missive to offer my advice you asked in your letter and some personal experience which might help you.

Having a class 5 driving licence would not only help you to get job easily but also required many times in personal emergency. I personally used Brar Driving School and also recommend to use the same for you as they have different training vechile according to your need, in addition to this they have cities best training instructor, which help you to clear all your dobuts while learning, moreover, training school is very near to your house which will help you to start training without taking leaves from your office.

On my personal experience, initally buy a used car and get your hand on it first before buying nee car, whch not only save money of insurance but also help you to focus on road leaving tension of scratches on new car aside.

In the end, Happy learning.

Your truly

Anand

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79289940828 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24203361948 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668639053254 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.743982719 44.8134815571 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.714285714 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 4.34317383033 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129708997319 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608243394885 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462436857458 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048078323723 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505289681465 0.0580467560999 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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