Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to your local council. In your letter:
- give details of how you and your friends or family use the center
- explain why the center is important for the local community
- describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter concerning the proposed plan to close down the St. Victor Sporting Center in our district.
St. Victor Sporting Center is a place that I and my friends frequently go to exercise on a daily basis. We especially love the tennis court that we play every Monday and Thursday. There are so many activities going on at the center that your plan to shut it down affects deeply to our community.
The center is not only a place for the locals to play sports but also a place for meeting and socializing. Besides, built in 1897, it became a part of Laval’s history and identity. For me, St. Victor is an integrated feature of the neighbourhood that we must protect.
If the plan to close the center goes ahead, the locals will lose an important facility both in terms of usefulness and spirituality. Moreover, there are no other sports centers within a reasonable distance, the closure will have a direct effect on local people’s health.
Please reconsider your plan and I hope that you will make the right decision.
Yours faithfully,
Kevin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74736842105 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63023123384 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6022865902 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280674416197 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983322804661 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635508651073 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135325982158 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362017885773 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.