Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing regarding the local council's decision about the sports and leisure center closure.
In fact, the sports center of the council plays a crucial role not only in my life but also in my friends'. Two of my friends and I join the sports club for several years. doing exercise in the council's club brings numerous beneficial aspects to our lives. First and foremost it helps us to keep fit and have a healthy life. Along with this, doing regular sports can alleviate the stress and put us in a jolly mood and gives us a huge pleasure particularly after our work time.
I believe every region for keeping the people of that area healthy both physically and mentally ought to offer these affordable classes such as art, mini-movie theatres and gym. Without them, that region is not a complete one and these services are part of every peoples' right.
If the local council has the serious intention to the closing of that these two centres, certain sections of our region such as the elderly and teenagers are going to get bored in their free time. Further, people with a limited budget might get deprived of any extra activities related to sports or pastime.
I completely understand the financial problems the council is facing, however, for clearing up this problematic issue closing might not seem a neat way to follow. In case of possibility, You can ask the government to take action to tackle this matter.
Thanks for your time and consideration.
I hope the citizen can receive affirmative feedback on this issue.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, well, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50174428945 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5998539257 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.875 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198082093418 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574661278229 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609716976074 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916474774517 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947160867719 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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