Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement about voluntary work at the local hospital.
Being a fervent admirer of the free services you provide to the poor patients, I decided to dedicate my leisure time to help you. I am currently working as an administrative clerk in the nearby library and you can offer me any work related to documentation and billing. With an experience of more than 15 years in this field, I think I can fulfill your requirements successfully. Additionally, I can be helpful in areas such as customer information center, cleaning, and cooking.
My working hours at library are from 8 AM to 3 PM whereafter I can join your institute and server for 4 hours each day. Also, I am available on the weekends. If you accept me for this role, I can start from next Monday. You can reach me anytime by mail or phone.
I look forward to your reply.
Your's faithfully,
Jonathon
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 677.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60544217687 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83618813965 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680272108844 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1834090609 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268267961148 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989242549985 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069996450518 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168751198016 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813837110026 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.