Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing great.its a good news that your organization is appreciating people ,who are helping their community,by giving them awards .it will be a lot motivating for them.
On this auspicious occasion,i would like to bring in your information the person who is doing a commendable work. Mr.Anwar, doctor by profession ,is running various campaigns to bring awareness in sociaty about healthy diet and benefits of exercise.last year he did many free boot camps to guide people about their health.
in this era of busy life, he is putting his comfort aside for the sake of health of their community fellows.moreover he is doing it free while the cost of healthcare is a lot.
I believed that it will be an honour for him if your newspaper publish an ad ,about him and his work ,on front page for one day.it will not only encourage him that we appreciate his efforts but also will be helpful for his mission.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir or Madam, I hope you are doing great.its a good news that...
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...your organization is appreciating people ,who are helping their community,by givin...
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... people ,who are helping their community,by giving them awards .it will be a lot mo...
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...ng their community,by giving them awards .it will be a lot motivating for them. ...
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...them awards .it will be a lot motivating for them. On this auspicious occasion...
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...for them. On this auspicious occasion,i would like to bring in your information...
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...or them. On this auspicious occasion,i would like to bring in your information...
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...son who is doing a commendable work. Mr.Anwar, doctor by profession ,is running vario...
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...ble work. Mr.Anwar, doctor by profession ,is running various campaigns to bring aw...
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... it free while the cost of healthcare is a lot. I believed that it will be an ...
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... for him if your newspaper publish an ad ,about him and his work ,on front page fo...
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...er publish an ad ,about him and his work ,on front page for one day.it will not on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70481927711 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76062063199 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692771084337 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6477551656 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.2 76.5299724578 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.2 16.8248392259 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180118802368 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887092359707 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599866220748 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101313886822 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599853096891 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 8.37731958763 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.