Dear Sir or Madam,
I am delighted to know that your newspaper is rewarding local residents that have contributed immensely to make our society a better place. I am writing to recommend a person, I believe, should be recognised due to his invaluable services.
The name of this individual is Ben Tottenham who lives at 3 Dunmore Road, Epping 2121. He works in the local library and earns a reasonable salary for the living.
Although his income is average, he spends half of his money to help impoverished families by providing them free food and water in this scorching summer. He prepares food at home and drives around the town to distribute it among destitute people. Due to his financial instability, he is unable to offer meals to most of the needy ones so he is looking for some funding from the local council which is yet to be considered.
It would be highly appreciated if your establishment can help him by providing sufficient funds as a token of the award for his selfless commitment. Your support would help him accomplish his goal to feed all the needy people at least for some days.
Yours faithfully,
Pardeep Kumar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80303030303 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75809833358 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0173220924 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193694796221 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718788662539 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462966642282 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106281438453 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564611710005 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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