With the recent improvements to internet, people can leave views or opinion on certain goods or services they have purchased. Is it a good or a bad thing,
Discuss both and give your opinion with examples.
The internet provides us the power to share insights about a plethora of products and services. While many people believe that customers use it to portray false image of goods, others perceive this as the power to share valuable customer experiences. I fervently support this phenomenon and consider it as a voice of people.
People with opposing view see this trend as misleading. Competitors of esteemed organisations publish false reviews about popular products to minimise their sales which will improve the scope of their merchandise in the market. Coca-cola, a well-renowned brand, for instance, is dragged many times in news for unrelated reasons on unhygienic manufacturing ways and low-quality consumption of raw material, but none them have been ever proved. Undoubtedly, these fabrications influence some percentage of people who reduces sales. Lastly, many customers, today, try to take advantage of the internet and started intimidating sellers for the sake of discounted or free service.
Conversely, supporters of this freedom claim that it enables people to share honest views with others. Insights about a service not only improve company's reputation but helps in building trust for a brand. Online platforms give us the ability to raise concerns directly with higher management if not addressed by stores. Since these issues are raised publicly, companies resolve them instantly. People's opinion provides an overwhelming number of reliable choices where consumers can choose services as per their willingness relating to cost, reliability or duration. Being personally involved with Amazon for an issue with my Apple watch, they offered a new device straight away. Consequently, it improves the process in terms of effective communication.
In conclusion, while some people use this platform for criticism, others use it to create genuine awareness which eventually helps in improving customer's experience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, if, lastly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62328767123 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95805575104 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674657534247 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1019769965 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175809089984 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528976790604 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450080923852 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892580363468 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697170257534 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.