Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 word

Essay topics:

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. Steven,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to apologise for the inconvenience you have faced recently from the noise of my apartment.

We have changed the floors of the bedroom and kitchen as they got damaged by the movement of heavy equipments. For that, the mason and his co-workers took three days to renovate the whole surface. The drilling machines and other noisy devices were creating a lot of unbearable noises, that might have caused discomfort to you.

I am apologising for all the inconvenience from our side. I know your wife is facing chronic headache issues, but we forgot to let you know about the refurbishment work beforehand. I am sorry for everything and ensures you that this will not happen again in the future.

Nonetheless, we still have some pending work of kitchen but I have already asked the workers to do most of their work outside or in their workshop. Please accept our sincere apologies.

Kindly forgive us for our mistake.

Yours sincerely,

Mathew Woods

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...bout the refurbishment work beforehand. I am sorry for everything and ensures you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nonetheless, so, still, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92528735632 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66451682068 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3176598392 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4166666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270949878918 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875721653704 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775231713353 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126968243671 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114872073036 0.0580467560999 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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