Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house’s flat.Write a letter to your neighbours.In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologize describe what action you will take
Dear Mr behzadi,
I am your upstairs neighbor living in Apartment 13.
I'm writing a letter of apology to you about the weekend noise.
We had a graduation party for my brother who was studying neuroscience at Harvard.This was a tremendous success for our family. On the other hand, my brother was invited to work at a hospital in Michigan and traveled there after a few days.I know there was a lot of noise that day. The music was loud and the kids were playing together and we were unaware of them.
I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience we have caused to you.f course I have to say that last week I came to you and invited you to this party. But you weren't home, and I thought you wouldn't come home by the weekend.
I promise that the sound of music will rise at home again. And to comfort you, I'd like to invite you to a dinner.And I am glad you accepted my invitation.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours sincerely,
Daniali
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and invited you to this party. But you werent home, and I thought you wouldnt come ho...
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...rise at home again. And to comfort you, Id like to invite you to a dinner.And I am...
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... you, Id like to invite you to a dinner.And I am glad you accepted my invitation. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54055986831 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.961947758 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244453067101 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934385665309 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670704424512 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118000287443 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507146037908 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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