Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from you house/flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
1. Explain the reasons for the noise
2. Apologise
3. Describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am really sorry for the inconvenience caused to you. I have received your letter today in which have mentioned the trouble from the sound which came from our house.
Let me explain you in detail, my dog is having some severe health issues because of which he makes the loud noise especially at night. We are taking him to the veterinary hospital regularly, but the doctor is saying that he will take some to recover.
When I get to know from you letter that the sound of the dog was causing you huge trouble that you are not able sleep at night, above this, when I read that you son is having exam from today I felt extremely bad, I really apologize from the bottom of my heart and understand you situation completely.
We have talked to the doctor, he is suggesting us to admit the dog in the hospital till the time he recover. We are taking him to the hospital in the evening and assure this noise will not cause you any more trouble.
Hope you will consider our situation and forgive us for the problem caused to you.
Yours sincerely,
Maninder Vadhrah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'recovers'.
Suggestion: recovers
...he dog in the hospital till the time he recover. We are taking him to the hospital in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51256281407 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27558862236 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552763819095 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9488349165 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333717094379 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131990805612 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617859049501 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179642694349 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048409291719 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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