Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Mrs Smith,
We really sorry about the annoying party that we had last weekend. Since me and my wife just moved to the city and our friends wanted to congratulate us on the new home, so I invited several friends to come over for celebration. However, the number of people came was out of my control because they brought more people. After a couple of wind glasses, the party had gone crazy. They started to sing karaoke, which was the cause of your complaint
I promise in the future, if we have the party again, I will make sure that telling the guess that do not bring more people and behave respecfully to our neighbour.
Please accept my apologise by an invitation to come over my house so we can get to know more of each others, as well as I would love to have an idea of this area. I would be a pleasure for me to have you at dinner next weekend.
Let me know if you accept the invitation.
Sincerely,
Jane
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25142857143 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17743530094 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 175.0 16.3608247423 1070% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 744.0 76.5299724578 972% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 175.0 16.8248392259 1040% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 41.0 4.34317383033 944% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112528126372 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112528126372 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671163482987 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101282772796 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 86.1 8.37731958763 1028% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -89.23 70.7449484536 -126% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 69.2 7.45979381443 928% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.55 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.39 7.59969072165 189% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 72.0 8.54432989691 843% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 8.15463917526 650% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.