Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to the complain that you have regarding the noise in our house. Actually as you know summer vacations are going on and adding to that my sister's family is here to visit us with her children. When kids are together they make a lot of noise when they are playing together, arguing with each other, or fighting for sweets.
I would like to apologize for the noise that they are making, I understand that you have elderly people at home and they need rest in afternoon. I would really appreciate your understanding and thank you for not filing a formal complain at the community office. Its very thoughtful of you, for talking to me first and giving me a chance to resolve your problem.
I would like to assure you that I would make sure that children's are not making noise in the afternoon from 2pm to 5pm. I would plan some activity in that time like, taking them to the near by park or to a gaming parlor so that they can play there. I hope this will work out and I really thank you for you understanding the situation once again. Along with this letter I am also sending some sweets for the inconvenience that I have caused.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Christopher
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in response to ...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...I am writing this letter in response to the complain that you have regarding the noise in ou...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...y in that time like, taking them to the near by park or to a gaming parlor so that they...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing parlor so that they can play there. I hope this will work out and I really th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, really, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48430493274 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43081592351 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582959641256 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.6399519202 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274483345195 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108820759647 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626134770546 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16890346104 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560024737771 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.