Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month.
Write a letter to your friend who is an amateur musician. In your letter
● ask your friend to perform at the wedding
● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event
● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree
Dear JOhn,
Hello! I am at pink of my health and hope, you're sailing in the same boat. I am inscribing this letter to inquire you that whether it would be possible for you to perform as a musician in my sister's marriage.
As I know that you're novice in the field of music, but I am not skeptical about your capabilities. It is next to impossible for me to forget the backlashes of my wedding ceremony , where you had spellbound the whole ambience with your melodious voice Although you are still grasping the in depth knowledge about music from a renowned pop singer, it would be great opportunities to expose your in born talent.
Frankly speaking, I would not be mind if you charge a legitimate amount form me as I realize that you have to incur some expenses to prepare yourself for performance. It is unambiguously cleared that if you not apprise me with amount of compensation then I would have to reimburse you with other mode.
Hope we would meet soon. Take care and stay healthy.
Best wishes
Navdeep Puri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: you're
...my sisters marriage. As I know that youre novice in the field of music, but I am ...
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Suggestion: ,
...et the backlashes of my wedding ceremony , where you had spellbound the whole ambi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the in depth knowledge about music from a renowned pop singer, it would be great...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as I realize that you have to incur some expenses to prepare yourself for perform...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, frankly, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65027322404 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66208389988 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633879781421 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9350889112 44.8134815571 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301174744584 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103105665813 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867069921627 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158976929386 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107855509874 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.