Your town council has decided to demolish an historic building due to lack of funds to renovate. Write a letter to your counsellor. In your letter, you should say:
-how you got to know of this news
-why it is important to preserve the historic building
-how the funds could be generated.
Dear Sir,
I hope you are doing well by the grace of Almighty. I am a local resident of our town since my birth and I am writing today in regards to preserve our antique church which is in the woods.
I heard from one of my neighbors that the council has planned for a deforestation program in the middle of the woods where our town's oldest church is built. In this program, the council has also decided to bring down the church for the development of new area with the help of a private organization because of the insufficient governmental funds required for renovation.
Yet our town's church building needs the renovation, demolishing it would not be a great idea as it represents as a historical monument of our small town. Due to this, outsiders from different state come to our town which serves the needs of bread and butter for native people in our area.
Consequently, being a historical monument building, we can generate funds by advertising our town's tourism beautiful destinations which includes lakes, mountains, forests, and our well-known 500 years old church. With the help of tourism coming from different parts of world, the council would get enough money to preserve to the whole land of woods including the church.
I hope you would like my suggestion and will cancel the demolishing of our oldest town's church.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...n since my birth and I am writing today in regards to preserve our antique church which is in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tique church which is in the woods. I heard from one of my neighbors that the...
^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'towns the oldest'.
Suggestion: towns the oldest
...am in the middle of the woods where our towns oldest church is built. In this program, the c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90638297872 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75387212475 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0494323313 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149826381122 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674099715259 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310578111839 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794136777073 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173249800509 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...n since my birth and I am writing today in regards to preserve our antique church which is in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tique church which is in the woods. I heard from one of my neighbors that the...
^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'towns the oldest'.
Suggestion: towns the oldest
...am in the middle of the woods where our towns oldest church is built. In this program, the c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90638297872 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75387212475 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0494323313 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.3 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149826381122 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674099715259 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310578111839 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794136777073 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173249800509 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.