This is a contoversial issue which is very common to student's in their adolescent years. Irrespectful to teachers, bullying their classmates, even to the extent that student's brought a gun in school and parents were caught unaware of this situation. The reason behind this severe problem with student's behaviour will be discussed in this essay.
There are factors that became the reason why students were having some peculiar behaviour. Firstly, some of them lacks attention from their parents that is the reason they have to act this way just to get their parent's attention. Secondly, at this stage student's is experiencing hormonal imbalances which causes them to act that way leaving them to act uncontrollably with their situation. In addition to, an overly exposed student to a viscious computer games which indirectly causing damage in the way they think can contribute to this scenario.
In contrary to all of the reasons being listed, with regards to these situation not only the students would be the focus for this. Parents, environment, cultural background, friends and siblings will also be included by taking their history why students were acting differently.
Therefore, every angle in student's lives or experiences should be evaluated to determine what causes this problem even asking for a professional help from a psychiatrist can help them find the solutions and would help them improve their student's behaviour.
which is very common to student's in their adolescent years.
which is very common to students in their adolescent years.
that student's brought a gun in school
that students brought a gun in school
at this stage student's is experiencing hormonal imbalances
at this stage students are experiencing hormonal imbalances
Sentence: Secondly, at this stage student's is experiencing hormonal imbalances which causes them to act that way leaving them to act uncontrollably with their situation.
Description: The tag a noun, singular, common, genitive is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Refer to student's and is
Sentence: In addition to, an overly exposed student to a viscious computer games which indirectly causing damage in the way they think can contribute to this scenario.
Description: The fragment which indirectly causing is rare
Therefore, every angle in student's lives or experiences should be evaluated to determine what causes this problem even asking for a professional help from a psychiatrist can help them find the solutions and would help them improve their student's behaviour.
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Sentence: This is a contoversial issue which is very common to student's in their adolescent years.
Error: contoversial Suggestion: controversial
Sentence: In addition to, an overly exposed student to a viscious computer games which indirectly causing damage in the way they think can contribute to this scenario.
Error: viscious Suggestion: vicious
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 228 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 228 350
No. of Characters: 1188 1500
No. of Different Words: 132 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.886 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.211 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.713 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 89 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.25 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.373 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.638 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5