Now days people care about their appearance better than before to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Fashion is very important because fashion can make your self very confidence. I you are good style you can look more beautiful. Many other modes in the world elegan style, casual style, sport style, etc. Paris is the center of mode in the world. Because many other desainers are very familiar to stay in Paris. So many other from Paris. Paris is the romantic city and mode city which is very familiar in the world. You know, fashion nowdays people care about their appreance better than before to world extend.
Of course, I agree because fashion mode grow you know harajuku style from japan, korea mode, china mode, etc. Many various styles are avaliable in the world of course they are very good style not ancient. The last time fashion not good because if you choose the colour not colour full but know many other choose people, style are very nice because mode more grow for example in indonesia, they have many familiar designers, she is dian pelangi the famause hijab desainer. Now many others mode hijab is very good combination colour is so nice, very different the last time the mode hijab does not uniqe not like mode hijab now and the colour is not colourfull. Many other people confidence if the style elegan and modern for example if you enter a company you must have good looking. Especialy if you enteran international ccompany you must very good looking. Because this condition many other ccompany in the world but people do not interest about just your cover or style because the more important is your attitudde self and brain. If you smart and your attitude self is very good is never mind if you are not stylist because the ability is more important better than just style. So don’t look people just cover but the attitude an ability is more important. For me it is not good if you just think about style you must balance your attitude, your style and your ability must be good.
I think if you confortable with your style you don’t follow the modern style, just keep your self.
can make your self very confidence
can make your self very confident
Sentence: I you are good style you can look more beautiful.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to I and you
Many other modes in the world elegan style, casual style, sport style, etc.
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fashion nowdays people care about their appreance better than before to world extend.
Description: what is the subject for this sentence? fashion or people ?
Sentence: Of course, I agree because fashion mode grow you know harajuku style from japan, korea mode, china mode, etc. Many various styles are avaliable in the world of course they are very good style not ancient.
Description: The fragment mode grow you is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace grow with verb, past tense
Sentence: Now many others mode hijab is very good combination colour is so nice, very different the last time the mode hijab does not uniqe not like mode hijab now and the colour is not colourfull.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and mode
Description: The tag an adjective is not usually followed by the
Suggestion: Refer to different and the
Sentence: Many other people confidence if the style elegan and modern for example if you enter a company you must have good looking.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and confidence
Sentence: If you smart and your attitude self is very good is never mind if you are not stylist because the ability is more important better than just style.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to you and smart
Description: The word just is not usually used as an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to just
Sentence: I think if you confortable with your style you don't follow the modern style, just keep your self.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to you and confortable
Sentence: Many other modes in the world elegan style, casual style, sport style, etc. Paris is the center of mode in the world.
Error: elegan Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Because many other desainers are very familiar to stay in Paris.
Error: desainers Suggestion: designers
Sentence: You know, fashion nowdays people care about their appreance better than before to world extend.
Error: appreance Suggestion: appliance
Error: nowdays Suggestion: ?
Sentence: Of course, I agree because fashion mode grow you know harajuku style from japan, korea mode, china mode, etc. Many various styles are avaliable in the world of course they are very good style not ancient.
Error: avaliable Suggestion: available
Sentence: The last time fashion not good because if you choose the colour not colour full but know many other choose people, style are very nice because mode more grow for example in indonesia, they have many familiar designers, she is dian pelangi the famause hijab desainer.
Error: desainer Suggestion: ?
Error: famause Suggestion: famous
Sentence: Many other people confidence if the style elegan and modern for example if you enter a company you must have good looking.
Error: elegan Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Especialy if you enteran international ccompany you must very good looking.
Error: ccompany Suggestion: company
Error: enteran Suggestion: ?
Sentence: Because this condition many other ccompany in the world but people do not interest about just your cover or style because the more important is your attitudde self and brain.
Error: attitudde Suggestion: attitude
Error: ccompany Suggestion: company
Sentence: I think if you confortable with your style you don't follow the modern style, just keep your self.
Error: confortable Suggestion: comfortable
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 357 350
No. of Characters: 1609 1500
No. of Different Words: 140 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.347 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.507 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.015 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.748 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.765 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.434 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.312 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5