The relative importance of following local customs and welcoming cultural differences is a frequent topic for discussion when people try to explain the proper behavior of visitors when come to other counties. However, both views need to be examined before commenting on a final decision. My inclination is argued further.
Focusing on the first point it can be said that following local behavior is a kind of respect concerning on other counties’ culture. Since visitors and local people may develop different attitudes towards life, different rules may come into being. For example, people in Un...
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when people try to explain the proper behavior of visitors when come to other counties
when people try to explain the proper behavior of visitors who come to other counties
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