Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over couple of decades. Presently, some people assert that car is the fabulous mode of travelling in the cities for social, business and commercial purposes. By contrast, others claim that bicycle is beyond compare as far as traveling into city is concerned. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support former view. First and foremost, a car allows us to save our precious time with the help of its fastest speed where as bicycle is slowest way of travelling. Hence, it is worthwhile to man...
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is beyond compare
is beyond comparison
bicycle is slowest way of travelling
bicycle is the slowest way of travelling
it is luxury, comfortable, entertaining and safe mode of travelling
it is a luxury, comfortable, entertaining and safe mode of travelling
bicycle is eco-friendly mode
bicycle is an eco-friendly mode
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