The spread of multinational companies and the increase in globalisation produce positive effects for everyone . Do you agree or disagree ?
I disagree with the statement that the growing globalisation along with the expanding multinational companies benefits all the people . Although supporters of globalisation claim that there are many benefits of MNCs , they are in fact damaging the quality of life . A number of arguments support my opinion .
My first argument relates to their products . Supporters of globalisation would argue that multinational companies produce high quality goods available to most people . While this may be true to some extent , its also means we have less choice of products to buy . When powerful multinational companies invade local markets with their goods , they often force local companies with fewer resources to go out of business . In consequences , we are obliged to buy multinational products whether we like them or not .
Secondly , it is sometimes said that MNCs and globalisation are making societies more open . This is true to some extent but the fact cannot be ignored that as a result the human race is losing its cultural diversity . If we consumed different products societies all over the world would be more varied . This can be seen by the fact that we all shop in similar multinational supermarkets and buy identical products wherever we live .
Thirdly , defenders of multinational companies often point out that they provide employment . Although this is undoubtedly true it also means we have become more dependent on them which in turn makes us more vulnerable to their decisions . When , for example , a multinational company decides to move its production facility to another country , this has an adverse effect on its workers who lose their jobs . What is more , the jobs MNCs provide are not paid as much as they have to pay for similar jobs in their country . So , in fact they are exploiting workers of poor nations .
To put it in a nutshell , I pen down saying that , multinational companies do have their benefits , but they also have their drawbacks and not everyone is benefited by them .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'for example', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207756232687 0.247107183377 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.174515235457 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0997229916898 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.0501214627716 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0969529085873 0.0437548338989 222% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12188365651 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0360110803324 0.0403226058552 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93655126523 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332409972299 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00554016620499 0.00163938923432 338% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0692520775623 0.0861772015684 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138504155125 0.021408717616 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138504155125 0.011925033212 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2060.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 360.0 316.048096192 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72222222222 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294444444444 0.374742101984 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252777777778 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180555555556 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119444444444 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93655126523 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.56093040696 83% => OK
Word variations: 48.3424692105 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4812364089 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.814263465372 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 3.99599198397 1001% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.2777777778 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.12820512821 1.69124875643 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265991398882 0.332605444948 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0932134711189 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0606448914378 0.0668466124924 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512477640814 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163492370793 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092948926045 0.134430193775 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678753116987 0.0742795772207 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.219668028598 0.324371583561 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0346402970548 0.0638462369009 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166824190648 0.228012699653 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718397890751 0.058150111329 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9