Action movies with spectacular car chases are very popular to young people. It is often said that these sorts of movies lead to an increase in car accidents among young drivers as they try to copy what they have seen in the films. Do you agree that such movies increase the amount of bad driving? What can be done to encourage young people to drive more safely? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Films tend to have a huge impact on young people who are affected by what they see and hear. In this case, the fact that car chases in action films tend to lead to an increase in car accidents among young drivers because they try to imitate what they have seen in the movies. They drive too fast and take unnecessary risks and the difficulty is that most young people lack the skills and experience.
There are many ways to encourage young drivers to practice safer driving habits. Firstly, the government should launch a safe driving campaign to convey the message: the truth is that driving safely is not a joke. In reality, it will be great and cool when alive and healthy! Secondly, each film should make a clear introduction that dangerous car chases are only performed in strict safety conditions with experienced drivers and special movie-making tricks commonly used. Use to increase the effect of the action phase. Third, young people should be forced to follow safe driving courses every year for the first five years of having a driving license. In this way, they are forced to improve their driving skills or they will be disqualified.
As a part of the course, young drivers should go to the hospital and witness the effects of unattended driving on others. When they see hospitalized people and their lives are destroyed due to foolishly taking risks, they will surely change their minds about whether or not they are stylish when they become copies of the heroes act and launch vehicles quickly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80842911877 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35630003416 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8048268925 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307873326702 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117701984258 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114619044961 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218896034406 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112900756591 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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