Adults do less exercise nowadays. Some people think that people can be encouraged to live healthy lives by telecasting sporting events such as the Olympics or the world cup. Others think that there are better ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is irrefutable that many people are adopting the sedentary lifestyle around the world. A general section of society advocates that the broadcast of various international events using digital media can help people to opt healthy lifestyle whereas I agree with others who suggest that there are other methods for well being such as providing sports centres and other health facilities at reasonable prices.
On the one hand, some people argue that by watching the various sports events can help people to adopt exercises practises in their day to day life because they would be encouraged after watching the performance of their favourite sports person. As people watch their role model playing in the field, they try to follow them and replicate their routine in their schedule. Take the example of International Cricket World Cup, having millions of viewers, where people follow their favourite sportsperson and try to perform like them after watching them in events. These sporting events are supposed to make an imprint on the lives of people; therefore, they start to include some healthy exercise in their inactive lifestyle.
On the other hand, many advocates that there are umpteen other ways to make people interested in exercise regime by constructing gymnasiums and parks for adults for subsidized cost in local areas. In other words, if the government provide people with well-furnished gymnasiums and parks on subsidized prices, people would definitely visit them without putting extra efforts on their pockets. A survey conducted by World Health Organization revealed that in Canada, where sports facilities are provided on subsidized rates, people are found to be long-lived owing to their healthy lifestyle. Moreover, people should be made aware about the consequences of unhealthy living style leading to life-threatening diseases such as obesity and hypertension through media so that they inculcate the healthy regime.
In conclusion, despite telecasting of various events can motivate people to live healthy, I believe people can be stirred up by providing the basic health facilities on subsidized prices in their locality which would be an absolute imperative to keep them fit and healthy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39193083573 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74821601116 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538904899135 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8357767727 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.090909091 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5454545455 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332634866881 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131491353798 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545560898093 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201007664352 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358250584534 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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